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End of Week 9: The End of Phase 3, my Game Ideas Presentation Feedback (29 - 30/11/2019)

All physical work on this topic can be found on page 18 of the black sketchbook. This feedback was physically written on the 30th of November, but the actual presentation day was on Friday the 29th of November 2019.


The presentation marking the end of Phase 3 was done on Friday the 29th November. We exhibited to the class what game ideas we had been spending the last four weeks developing, and what we had ultimately come up with.


For more in-depth information, visit my 'End of Week 9: The End and Outcome of Phase 3: My Game Ideas Presentation (27 - 30/11/2019)' post.


This is the feedback I received from the game ideas presentation on Friday 9th November. People seemed to enjoy it and engaged with as much as they could. Most comments were positive, some were critically constructive and some people were asking questions and some were referencing other games:

  • It seems like you've already put a lot of thought into your design so far, seems fleshed out already. Have you created any prototypes yet though?

  • It would be cool to play the card prototypes

  • I love the class system in a card game setting! Really interesting

  • I like the idea of balancing moral choices. Sorta like Infamous. What is considered morally wrong and right in the game?

  • I appreciate that there is a character list, you could flesh them out even further to have strong personalities to aid role-play?

  • Idea 1: It could be interesting to design this as a single-player board game. Although they're not very popular, choosing a moral standing character with a group could cause issues. Otherwise the use of moral stand points in a game can be sketchy because my views on morals can be completely different from someone else's. Idea 2: Has a lot of potential to hit your gore marks which sounds fun. The art style for this would need to be solid but the general idea actually sounds great. Simple is sometimes better. Idea 3: Could be an interesting theme. Maybe from the viewpoint of the Natives though and the Yanks are the intruders.

  • There is a game called Mechs VS Minions where your characters unlock more skills as you play missions

  • Look into the game called Theme Hospital for the second idea

  • Idea 2 maybe look at Papers Please its solo gameplay done simple is very effective

  • Idea 2 <3

  • Idea 2 <3

  • I actually really like the medic game, I think it could be really different.

  • Bartender idea <3

  • Cannibal idea reminds me of the multiplayer jason game which is very fun

  • I am not sure how I feel about the game ideas. The first one seems like D&D American frontier edition, the second reminded me of that educational surgeon game for children where you pluck out things out of organs. I'd suggest picking out the essential experience of the theme, the American frontier. What is essentially interesting about -

  • I like how you have a lot of mechanics in mind



29 - 30/11/2019 - Presentation Day

End of Phase 3

Week 6: 04/11/2019 - 10/11/2019

Week 7: 11/11/2019 - 17/11/2019

Week 8: 18/11/2019 - 24/11/2019

Week 9: 25/11/2019 - 01/12/2019

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